Could I please have some feedback on my graphic?

It's for a TCBY store. I can't change any of the words, I am just making the graphic. Any tips would be great.

1 year ago - 1 answers

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Type spacing seems a bit crowded and hard to read.

Text on solid BG may look a bit old school but works.

Text over a portion of a giant ice cream filling the banner background might attract the eye, on web pages overcoming "banner blindness" takes some ingenuity.

1 year ago