Question
I need opinions on my advertisement!?
I am going to be posting advertisements for pet sitting around my town (in shop windows and the such) I need your opinions on whether you think my advertisement is ok please. Is there anything you think i should ad? PET SITTING SERVICES AVAILABLE Are you going away this Summer but are having trouble finding someone to look after your pets? I have recently completed a 2 Year BTEC Animal Management college course and have personal and educational experience with handling a variety of animals. I am trustworthy, organised and truly compassionate towards animals. The pet sitting service includes routine meals, walks, grooming and most importantly the TLC your animal needs while you’re away. More information on the pet sitting service available upon request. Contact me: (email address here) or (mobile number) Im english so its organised not organized Thank you for your opinions and help so far =]
5 months ago - 7 answers
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Sounds like a great service! However, I'd shorten the headline a little. Maybe break it down, as follows: "Going away this summer and need someone to care for your pets?" You may also like to mention references (available on request?) Best of luck.
by Roxy
5 months ago
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I think it's very good except you spelled organized incorrectly.
by Patricia C- 5 months ago
I think that sounds really good, I would be happy to trust you with my pet.
by kruella- 5 months ago
Sounds great! All the best!
by jpk973- 5 months ago
Consider placing an image of dogs in the upper portion of the space...or even a person walking dogs if its available. This will help instantly identify what you are about, and will attract the eye of pet owners. "Going Away this summer?" is your headline. Bullit point the strong points mentioned in your paragraph. Then for service..... consider placing heart bubbles ( or similar graphic) around the area that you mention "TLC" that flow off the page. It shows some personality on your part and will help strengthen your message of "I love animals" Best of luck
by Doran P- 5 months ago
In addition to placing your advertisement in shop windows, maybe placing it underneath shop doors, private apartment entrances and homes may provide a wider area of coverage. Good luck!
by VicSEO- 5 months ago
Real good - I'm with Roxy, main headline are what you do and contact numbers, all rest is just extra. And put your phone number in block caps and big cos people will note that down, they wont scribble your email down as easily. Good Luck.
by robert m- 5 months ago