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Does this sound good?
This is the bio of a web design firm in LA that I have to type up.....Tell me if it needs something. Please feel free to add whatever you'd like. Here at FAID Designs our designers come up with new innovative ways to make your life easier on the world wide web every day. We take your ideas and give them life on your website. We provide a number of ways to increase the marketing and the popularity of your site. Either your a model/artist in need of a new sleek portfolio page or a major corperation trying to sell a great deal or product, FAID Designs has got your back for any of your web design needs.
3 months ago - 4 answers
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sounds kind of amateurish for some reason....idk why just kinda makes me question you? Maybe try it again make it more fluid, and some of those sentences are just plain akward...they dont sound good..
by jimmy
3 months ago
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I totally agree with the person before me. I would not trust you to design my site. Try using some comas, shorter sentences. There are also grammar errors. Sorry for being blunt. Good luck!
by marissa- 3 months ago
in addition to the previous two responses, you haven't motivated me to buy! That's the bottom line. How is your product better or different than the competition, or how can your product "really" help me. In other words, do your designs save me time, money... or what? Describe how these new innovative ideas make my life easier, or describe the ideas themselves, or better yet, describe both! Now the hard part... try to do the above without sounding like normal "hype" that everyone reads on the internet.
by Jim C- 3 months ago
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by Daryl C- 3 months ago