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what do you think of this portion of my resume ?
La Perla De Amazonas January 2002 - Present Manager Santa Ana, CA •Duties: schedules, employee training, developed new sales techniques. •Achievements: Achieved a sales consistency rating of 99%. •Improved customer service feedback first month as manager. •Consistently met or exceeded sales expectations. •Won highest award for managerial excellence. Stonefield Mortgage •Sept 05-august 07 Lead Lake Forest , CA Loan Officer /Business to Business Development •Motivate sales team to reach maximum potential. •Monitor sales team pipeline to maximize peak performance. •Coaching and training my team on new lender programs and products. •Ensuring all loans meet regulatory guidelines, tracking individual and team performance. •Recruiting mortgage professionals to work in a high paced environment. •Established relationships in an assigned territory that covered irvine with realtors, builders, insurance brokers, and tax preparers. •op sales team for 12 consecutive months. •n
2 months ago - 1 answers
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You need to proof it. There shouldn't be a single mistake on a resume. Yours has lots and they are distracting. The dates don't make sense. You were at LaPerla from 2002 to the present, yet you were with Stonefield from 2005-2007. Seems to me one of those sets of dates is wrong. Are you sure it's not LaPerla from 2002 to 9/2005? Some of your bullets are in the past tense; others aren't. You say "monitor sales team" and then later "established relationships". Why the different tenses? Some words that should be capitalized are not. Your qualifications look good, but if you make sloppy mistakes on a resume, I wouldn't hire you.
by Walter J
2 months ago
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